By now you should have had a chance to look at some of the written work other people have done.
You won’t have seen all of the work, but here are some links to more of the storybirds.
Have a look at them and make a comment on this blog. Remember that all comments on this site are moderated and will not be published if I feel that they are going to cause offence to anyone. Don’t write anything you wouldn’t like your parents, or grandparents, to see!
If you’d like to make one of your own and don’t have a login password, come and see me.
all these story birds are fantastic! all the students have worked very hard on this!
I think that Sam and Jake’s is very good, also Hannah’s and Ally’s. Ellie and Rosie used some very good vocabulary and images. Well done! <3
alexandra and hannah, your story is very good and intresting!
sophia mosca & emma allison, your work is great!